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Shannon's avatar

Great story! Can't wait to read more!

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Great! I'm so glad! Thank you for the kind words! More coming soon! :)

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Dave Kachel's avatar

Well I wasn’t expecting that, but looking forward to reading more. Definitely have my attention!

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Haha! I love it! What were you expecting! LOL. Thanks for reading, Dave! Keep in mind, it's a modern myth of adventure and wonder. :)

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Dave Kachel's avatar

Exactly. Never read a fiction novel where the author was part of the novel. I like it! Like taking a good dream and writing it down in detail. Guess that is what happened to some degree. Pretty cool!

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Elaine Montgomery's avatar

This story grabbed my curiosity a d wouldn't let go

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Yah! Thanks for leaving a comment! Excited for you to read the next instalment. :)

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Beth Paolini's avatar

I was immediately pulled in and couldn’t stop reading until I ran out of words to read. I’m excited for the next installment!

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Yah! I'm so happy! I'm excited to post Chapter 2. Some Thanksgiving reading for you. :)

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Rizalina K. Araral's avatar

Wow. This is exciting. Can't wait for Chapter 2!

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Fantastic! Thank you for the kind words! Chapter 2 coming soon!

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Mark Baroni's avatar

Dang bro! Dude…you gots talent!! Simply captivating!!!

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