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Dave Kachel's avatar

Now it’s getting really good! I like a story that makes me want to skip ahead to see what happens but keeps me I the present text so I don’t miss anything! Great story!

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Thanks, Dave! Yeah, the story now begins to really climb in my opinion. So glad you're enjoying it!

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Kelly's avatar

I might have just yelled ,”Nooo!!” at my phone just now when I scrolled down and saw that the next sentence was “ To Be Continued..” Killing us with Cliffhangers! 😆😁

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Timothy Willard's avatar

Ha! I'm loving this. LOL. I know, I know. I believe the next chapter, which is a good bit longer, will give you a bit more of a feeling of, "Ahhh ... that felt good." Maybe. No promises. Haha.

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Kelly's avatar

Good, because now I’m completely invested and I think Will, Aylin, and those bears owe me some explanations…. 😂

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Timothy Willard's avatar

They sure do! I'm hoping this next chapter delivers some explanations. :) LOL

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