Now it’s getting really good! I like a story that makes me want to skip ahead to see what happens but keeps me I the present text so I don’t miss anything! Great story!
I might have just yelled ,”Nooo!!” at my phone just now when I scrolled down and saw that the next sentence was “ To Be Continued..” Killing us with Cliffhangers! 😆😁
Ha! I'm loving this. LOL. I know, I know. I believe the next chapter, which is a good bit longer, will give you a bit more of a feeling of, "Ahhh ... that felt good." Maybe. No promises. Haha.
Now it’s getting really good! I like a story that makes me want to skip ahead to see what happens but keeps me I the present text so I don’t miss anything! Great story!
Thanks, Dave! Yeah, the story now begins to really climb in my opinion. So glad you're enjoying it!
I might have just yelled ,”Nooo!!” at my phone just now when I scrolled down and saw that the next sentence was “ To Be Continued..” Killing us with Cliffhangers! 😆😁
Ha! I'm loving this. LOL. I know, I know. I believe the next chapter, which is a good bit longer, will give you a bit more of a feeling of, "Ahhh ... that felt good." Maybe. No promises. Haha.
Good, because now I’m completely invested and I think Will, Aylin, and those bears owe me some explanations…. 😂
They sure do! I'm hoping this next chapter delivers some explanations. :) LOL
No time to comment- I’m off to the next chapter as quickly as possible. Ha!
“She never finished her story”?!?!!!! You’re fired! 😉